I would welcome more comments about my ideas about rebalancing my portfolio. I thought I had taken posters' suggestions on board, so I'm not sure why it might be considered a ragbag?
Since I used the word, I'll reply. You have substantial overlaps between what you are proposing to hold - so S&P /Vanguard/HSBC FTSE /F&C / JPM all have duplicated holdings, so working out what you are actually holding will require more analysis than the raw percentages you quote for them.
Finsbury looks like a bet on Nick Train, which will work until it doesn't.
And you are going to be well overweight the UK, which feels odd.